I read 3 essays and A for Alfi was my favorite....
The main point of the essay is about how Austen introduces his characters giving the reader distinct first impressions that which are not always valid.
The essay begins with an introduction to Austin's writing style. Leading to the first impressions that Austin provides the reader with The body paragraphs address characters that Austen gives false first impressions of. Also providing quotes that support these examples and the author clearly backs their thesis statement
The author has a good sentence structure. The only sentence i would revise would be the last sentence of the second paragraph. Its an awkward sentence in my opinion and it doesn't make sense. Also i found 2 grammatical errors that must be fixed.
Besides those few corrections, i think this essay topic was well addressed and structured clearly. It was an itneresting topic and the author did a great job at proving thier statement.
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