Essay Comments

My essay writing has improved since my last essay but i still have a few weaknesses I have to work on. I can make simple improvements such as proof reading more as well as printing the essay out and revising it on paper. But other errors I must work on is the way I structure my essay. I need to organize my ideas so that my essay is easier to understand. My ideas and analysis do not flow as smoothly as they should. But more importantly, I need to stick to the essay question! I guess it was a mis understanding of the question but regardless, writing off topic will obviously hurt my grade. From my essay comments I've learned that I am showing improvement but to fully succeed I have to become more aware of my weaknesses so that I can correct them when revising rather than the teacher catching them.